The sun sets
After a burning day,
Admiring the last glimpse
Of its Intoxicating rays.
As music dances
Through the air,
A gentle breeze
Caresses my hair.
A busy day
Is now laid to rest,
Feet are up
With a book to digest.
Moments like these
mean so much,
A little piece of paradise,
That I can touch.
K
Good to know…no need to act or pretend, that you have a friend, a kind soul that makes your day, accepts you as you are, enjoy your touch of heaven.
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Thank you, it’s the little things in life that we enjoy xx
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Sounds delightful. Quite the beautiful image you’ve shared. I don’t know if it’s me being sleepy but the rhymes are so gentle and the context so relaxing that it has a very calming vibe. Anyway, enough rambling from me…Lovely piece!!
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Haha exactly how I was feeling when I was writing, relaxed in my own world. And thank you x
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It certainly came across that way to me. Sounds like you’re having quite the day, thank you for sharing it with us and helping us get all cosy and relaxed in our own worlds!!!
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No problem, thanks for reading 🙂
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love your rhyme and flow, touches me every time the way you make the ordinary so beautiful
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Aw thank you, I am glad you enjoyed xx
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You describe such a lovely and pleasant day. The best friends are the ones you can be you around as you write. And putting up your feet and reading a book, sounds excellent.
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Thank you, and it was such a relaxing evening , makes you appreciate the little luxuries in life x
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Sounds like a perfect day!
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Thank you x
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you are terrific, simply amazing
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Thank you zx
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Thank you for sharing your art.
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Beautiful! Love it
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Thank you x
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😍😍😍😍
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Good ,need me time ,nothing more soothing than this
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Thank you
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Most welcome
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This is so beautiful and I can relate to this so well!
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Thank you x
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Lovely. Just lovely. Magical summer days. 😊🌞
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Thank you xx
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Beautifully written.
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Thank you xx
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A beautiful piece as always! 😉
I want to thank you for liking my post “No Second Chances”. I had had a smile on my face as I wrote it, and you liking it really made my day! Thanks a ton-ton-ton! 😀
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https://thelighteningandthefire.wordpress.com/2015/05/20/entice/
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moments, moments and moments… it’s all that’s left with us even after that soul is longer with us 🙂
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So true xx
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Really beautiful, as always. 🙂
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Thank you xx
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Love it, it’s how a day should end! 😃
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What a delightful scene you’ve woven into words!
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