Twisted path

Forever changing, twisted roads,
Carrying baggage, trying to unload,
Paths going, in different directions,
Hundreds of miles, searching for connection,

Long journey, to leave it all behind,
Fresh air, to clear my mind,
Walking through the light & the dark,
To battle myself, & leave my mark.

Feet hurt, but it’s a beautiful pain,
At the end, I’ll have more to gain,
The finish line, is still far away,
But I’m one step closer, everyday.


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22 Responses to Twisted path

  1. Rebecca Radd says:

    The last two verses are so inspirational. However, I liked this poem very much as a whole unit. You are truly amazing.

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  2. Jeffrey says:

    A wonderfully written, forward thinking, positive piece!

    Liked by 4 people

  3. EDC Writing says:

    One step closer good to hear

    Liked by 2 people

  4. Simon says:

    Keep going step by step. You’ll get there, I know it πŸ˜ƒ

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  5. cwaugh212 says:

    I have a smile. Enjoying your rhyme.
    Then I hear the message behind the lines,
    It starts me thinking, it makes me feel,
    That life has meaning, and texture, and zeal.

    We take our steps along the way,
    Sometimes not thinking that we should stay,
    And taste our life from the shaded pool,
    Unloading some luggage from the back of our mule.

    The trip made lighter, we can now travel far,
    Our head can look up, maybe seeing a star,
    Our feet not so weary, Our back not so bent,
    Let’s unload more luggage, It feels heaven sent.

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  6. Your poems get better every day πŸ™‚

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  7. Nam H Nguyen says:

    I love reading your poetry

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  8. i love reading evey single one of your pieces

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  10. nienaspeaks says:

    β™ͺ But I’m one step closer, everyday β™ͺ That is the reason I am always hopeful.

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  11. Eleanor says:

    Great. Really like this. The fact you’re prepared to face and deal with this stuff means I don’t doubt you’ll get where you want to be.

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  12. mandibelle16 says:

    Beautiful. Though a journey in life may be twisted and dark at times, this speaker realizes how vital the journey is. The destination is there, but she’s in no hurry, learning along the way. I love the line about her feet bring sore as a “beautiful pain,” because trips to many worth while destinations, definitely hurt ones feet.

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