Perceived as cold
Eyes are grey,
Surrounded by
Burning walls
Which scold.
They will never see,
I’m lost in a forever
Changing storm,
To remain
Edges are rough
A broken image,
By a heart
That’s forged from
Steel and Gold.
An unfinished story
Which is yet
To be written,
Still to be told.
Fooled by the image
The image
Of lies I’ve sold.
Look beyond the eyes
And witness,
The battle scars
Hidden deeper
Than any abyss,


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29 Responses to Abyss..

  1. Simon says:

    The abyss is so deep… Beautiful and powerful.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Eleanor says:

    Nothing I can say will be adequate – but I think this is profound.


  3. my valiant soul says:

    Intense and perfect.

    Liked by 2 people

  4. EDC Writing says:

    Perceived before your words … an unquiet weekend … x

    Liked by 1 person

  5. This is pretty spectacular


  6. Marvelous. You are great


  7. This is so powerful. Loved it.

    Liked by 1 person

  8. The image
    Of lies
    I’ve sold.
    Brilliant lines.


  9. Jeffrey says:

    They say the most powerful writing comes when the poet taps into their soul, rather than simply crafting. This piece is far more than craftsmanship, isn’t it. It finds its was right into my soul.


  10. Morgan says:

    This is beautiful

    Liked by 1 person

  11. mandibelle16 says:

    We see only pieces here and there, we cannot see underneath, to the scars and what was before. Your speaker is in constant flux; always changing, reforming. Lovely descriptions.


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