Many people,
So very loud,
Losing myself,
In an unbearable
An overwhelming
As the heart
Starts screeching,
Senses reaching
Full Height.
Pushing through
A crowd,
Turns into a fight.
fighting for sanity,
Hitting rock
This is my
Being surrounded
By people,
Surrounded by
A world of evil.


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21 Responses to Surrounded…

  1. Rashmi says:

    nice poem…:)

    Liked by 3 people

  2. cwaugh212 says:

    You build up the anxiety perfectly to give us a sense of how this might feel. Wonderful.

    Liked by 2 people

  3. Eric says:

    I have social anxiety. Big crowds are overwhelming to me. You made me feel that feeling I have in big crowds with your words. That’s AMAZING. You really captured that sense.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Rajiv says:

    Brilliant! I can feel you probing the dark…

    Liked by 1 person

  5. mandibelle16 says:

    Interesting poem. I think this character has anxiety in crowds. I can relate some, the noise really bothers me after a while, wears me out in some instances. But your last line caught me “surrounded by evil” like maybe it was more that she opulent trust all the people in the crowd which were surrounding her. She felt trapped because somewhere in this crowd, were very bad people.


  6. The Power&The Glory says:

    incredible writing


  7. Oh my does this resonate with me
    you’ve captured this chaotic nightmare is a beautifully suscinct way.


  8. Walter Rich says:

    Your writing is improving. You say a lot with few words.

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Excellent description of a fantastic poem. Sorry I haven’t been visiting your blog for a while 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

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