Rage…

In the middle of darkness,
An army raged,
Spreading the ashes,
Along the page.
A heart ruptured,
Bursting into light,
With the Blood
being written,
From the fire
Of the night.

K

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30 Responses to Rage…

  1. This sounds like it could be an introductory poem to a novel, offering the tone of the epicness the reader is in for.

    Excellent! 🙂

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  2. cwaugh212 says:

    Out of control, the fire spread wide,
    Burning all around, regardless of side,
    The tongue was not flame, for words it did spew,
    That burned every bridge, every road and avenue.

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  3. Simon says:

    I can almost see,hear and smell the battle.

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  4. Morgan says:

    This us terrific it, you could write a very intriguing book from that poem. It has so many gems inside of it. Well done xx

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  5. dornahainds says:

    Fantastic! And with your passion, passionate words, I was wondering if I could possibly interest you in a project that is very near and dear to my heart…

    We have 140 contributions to date, and I am trying again to rope in
    as many contributors to the Poets for Peace challenge
    (in place until this the end of August). The many voices in response
    to this have been fantastic, and I’d love you to add yours (again,
    if applicable) if you can. Feel free to use an existing piece of
    writing or a new one asking for peace and/or about the troubled
    times in which we live.

    If you are interested, please leave your poem in the comments
    section of Neha’s blog and it will be added.
    https://forgottenmeadows.wordpress.com/2016/07/16/calling-all-poetscreative-minds-to-a-grand-collaboration-poets-for-peace/comment-page-5/#comment-19287

    Thank you –
    Your voice matters.

    ‘We are so grateful to be part of this community where poets and
    creative minds from around the world stand together uniting for PEACE!
    This collaboration is open till August 31st and we hope to see more of
    you join in!’
    – Neha

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  6. EDC Writing says:

    Exceptional talent … so good to know you

    Liked by 1 person

  7. dioghaltas says:

    A beautiful verse. The simplicity of which, reminds me of the valiant last charge of the black Douglas, wherein he and four Scottish knights charged thousands of Moorish cavalry so as to throw the heart of Robert the Bruce among them. Thanks for sharing it; I look forward to exploring your blog further.

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  8. ❤️❤️❤️

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  9. Rajiv says:

    I am gonna have some rum tonight and think of this one!

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  10. ajaykohli says:

    We need warriors to root out terrorism

    Liked by 1 person

  11. mandibelle16 says:

    Powerful little piece. Too much battle, and blood…. Too much blood being used to write. Actually or metaphorically 🙂

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