He came out of nowhere
Like a gust of wind,
Blowing me over
Until my body was pinned.
The ocean in his eyes
Called me to the shore,
Drowning me in his iris
Into the depth of his core.
The electricity between us
Created a surge of power
Flashing through the sky
He is my meteor shower.
Like the Moon orbiting earth
In the beauty of the night,
He’s spinning around me
As my own satellite.
K
The Darkest Fairytale 
That’s a powerful and passionate piece. I liked it ☺
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Thank you, xxx
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I loved reading this poem. You’re very creative and talented 🤗
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Aww thank you as always, I like how you can always relate my dear.. it makes it worth writing x
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HE orbits YOU?
What kind of a chick wants THAT?
You should be orbiting HIM.
You’ve obviously never met me.
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Why what’s wrong with someone orbiting you? X
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A beta-male weakling who worships you orbits you.
A sexy man does not orbit. He draws you magically.
I’m sexy. Alpha. I guess if you’d prefer a beta-pussy who licks your ass all day long . . .
DO YOU?
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No I don’t. But it depends how you define orbiting. How I wrote it is his essence orbits me. The feeling of his live orbits me, But then again depends how its interpreted, x
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Do you admire his orbiting?
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I do not mind x
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😊
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Love the line “he is my meteor shower.” Wonderful post!
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Aww thank you x
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Well, well!
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Haha x
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Lovely poem. Puts pictures into my head. xx
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Thank you x
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Wow, that was fantastic.
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Thank you x
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Good one K from an odd piece of granite!
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Aww thank you x
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in some fashion,
of heavenly conspiracy,
our entangled universes:
lovestruck!
now orbit around
in desires earthly,
for forever.
you write skillfully……..great imagery………..sweet and beautiful…….absolutely loved it!! 🙂 🙂
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Aww that’s beautiful, thank you for sharing your words x
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my pleasure……… 😀 😀
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Thank you x
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Happy to read and share your work!!!
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