You had to follow
To become their slave,
They sucked you into
The devils cave.
Giving into their commands
You became lost,
Within the shadow lands.
Trapped into a life of sins
A life of greed & pain,
Where nobody wins.
We tried to pull you out
You silenced our voices,
You couldn’t hear us shout.
Is it better there, than here?
Are the demons more friendly,
Than the ones you use to fear.
Send us a message or a sign
Regardless of your sins
You’ll always shine.
K
The Darkest Fairytale 
“A life of greed & pain,
Were nobody wins.” Isn’t that supposed to be “where” nobody wins? Beautifully written. I love how you keep it simple yet so powerful!
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Probably, I’ve changed my grammar a few times since publishing haha, thank you x
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So real and raw. Beautifully done.
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Thank you lovely x
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Thought provoking, good poem.
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Thank you! Xx
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It’s very easy to become lost in the dark. Perhaps there, one can stay numb. But in reality, in the light all our short comings and flaws are exposed and suddenly we feel, and it hurts. But maybe something that shows us are true selves and even makes us feel pain is better for us, for in light there is also beauty and hope. Lovely one 😊
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Aww thank you Mandi that’s very true x
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Nice poem, Felt all the lines perfectly. Keep writing 🙂
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Thank you lovely x
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Reblogged this on Orthometry.
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Thank you xx
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You are welcome! Hope the Solstice & season are good to you!
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Thank you lovely, hope you have a good Christmas and new year xx
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You are welcome! May you be blessed with inspiration as well as material gifts!
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I’d rather have inspiration than gifts 🙂 x
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I like both, but if I must choose between them then I am with you!
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Haha yes!
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sometimes i think it is because of our flaws that we shine…
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Very true thank you x
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Marvelous, raw emotions
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Thank you xx
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It is always my pleasure
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I see you are a great writer! Great job👌!!!!!
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Thank you lovely xx
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