Fading away

I’m homesick for a place
I don’t know exists,
My body feels out of place
As this reality turns & twists.
It’s like a surreal dream
Which has many layers,
I’m trapped in this madness
Locked in my mind,
Just like Alice.
I’m very lonely here
It’s far too silent,
Paths are disappearing
And the sun is hiding.
The trees are frozen
Leaves don’t fall,
There’s nothing in the air
Except my desperate call.
I’m like an alien
Invading this planet,
But I’m slowly sinking
Just like the Titanic.
The doors are locked
I’m in too deep,
I pray for reality
To wake from this sleep.


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20 Responses to Fading away

  1. This describes the feeling of being out of place so well. Thanks for sharing πŸ™‚

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  2. Beautifully articulated. I feel you.

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  3. EDC Writing says:

    Few evoke feelings in the way you do

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  4. ajaykohli says:

    One can be alone but shouldn’t be lonely

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  5. So love how you described a feeling that is so hard to describe ..lol did that make since?

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  6. Coyote from Orion says:

    Glass onion x


  7. bethanyk says:

    This really resonates

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  8. a very eloquent description of being lost but still struggling to find your way.
    I really like the metaphors you be used in this and the despairing tone.

    I’m left with a question whether it’s worse to know the place doesn’t exist or know it does but you’ll never be able to get there.

    Really enjoyed this piece!


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