Different things

He wants a love
with sunsets,
walks on the beach
As we hold hands
under the heat.
I want a love
In the shadows
Of the moonlight
As we drink rum,
Under the stars
Before we trespass
To forbidden lands.

K

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62 Responses to Different things

  1. MultidimensionalHE says:

    How do both people achieve their wants?

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  2. tarnishedsoul says:

    Give and take? 😉

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  3. Heartafire says:

    they both sound pretty good! 🙂

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  4. Coyote from Orion says:

    Here I am thinking a pirates life for me again…. don’t let Lizzie get near the rum 😎😆

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  5. Coyote from Orion says:

    Again

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  6. Eleanor says:

    So eloquent, so few words say so much. Beautiful poem.

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  7. trE says:

    Opposites attract?

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  8. EDC Writing says:

    All things begin with the touch of hands … even getting at the rum

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  9. Rajiv says:

    Oh very well done..

    And yipee! Rum is back on the menu!

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  10. They’re both very beautiful ways to live but it’s hard for them to mesh.
    I don’t know which side I prefer, I guess it depends on my state of mind but something tells me for it to last I think the quiet serenity of the dark would be better. Besides it’s more fun to trespass 😄

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  11. Ali Qureshi says:

    Different things;
    Hard choices.
    Keep it up! 🙂

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  12. I want them both! Each in its own moment! Lovely poem!

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  13. devereaux frazier says:

    Reblogged this on Creative Writing Reblogged.

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